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Some new songs i wrote this past week! (Beats + lyrics)

Discussion in 'Gamer Creations' started by Malevolentality, May 12, 2012.

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  1. Malevolentality

    Malevolentality Malevolentality

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    I'm still getting there to recording, i'm just outta arms reach...i wanted to post
    on here 'cause i'd love to hear some of y'alls feedbacks... i get trolled for this
    by my peers, but i respect this site and the community... so i don't care what
    others think... never have either.

    Beats= Youtube links, they help the read go more smoothly,
    it's really cool if you ask me.. i love writing to beats..



    Beat:
    Blue Sky Instrumental - Common - YouTube

    -Deep in my blue sky-

    You can say love, since the day come and dad say "hey son",
    he musta felt like a made one when God said i was a change done,
    growing up, i stayed outta trouble and played it up as kid,
    from Majora's mask to call of duty blowin' ya brains up into bits,
    I broke it; the patterns my family's always focused on,
    now the drugs are gone and my love is God's,
    living this life to the fullest with open palms,
    yeah, fate's given me siblings, yeah we all cut from the same cloth,
    but we ain't got nothin in common but the same mom, but i love them.
    lemme ask you though, but i'll answer it myself,
    is it different, everyone thinkin 'gifted' with the lyrics i've written,
    not to me, my life changed to a different mind frame with livid visions,
    I got a future and all the sunshine in my pocket now,
    went through the door for pipe dreams and locked it down,
    i'm on a one way to success, i'm unrest 'till the sun's settin for me,
    nothin' but tests to defeat 'till Death's comin' for this essence of me,
    to hell with planes, and to hell with the moon, people like us walk on the outer limits,
    every hour's a minute to me compared to you and i,
    now all i see is a bluish sky in this fluent mind
    all in all it's just a form of my fluid rhymes,
    my second language i speak fluently,
    Metaphorical messages is a talent i got through music..see?

    ----

    -Faded memories-
    (Wrote this to Gotye's song 'Somebody i used to know', wrote it to fit the hip-hop instrumental though..)

    Beat:
    Somebody That I Used To Know [ Gotye Sample Hip Hop Instrumental With Hook ] Free Beat Download HQ - YouTube


    We made promises back then, what happened?
    now when i see you, it's in a past tense,
    i loved you like a brother,
    you told me i was your finest comfort,
    when our skies had thundered-
    everything that lied was ruptured..
    and.. i had your back as a friend,
    we trusted we'd never let 'this' attack it again,
    it seemed so hopeless, it fractured,
    then our bond was severed, broken and shattered,
    you said to me you never would change,
    had me assuming it'll be forever the same,
    'this' left me in a guessin' game of endless pains, now-
    swimmin' to dreams, i travel back to the better days...
    when i was drenched in them evanescent rains,
    where my penances slayed and folded woes,
    i remember when you cried to me and those eyes told the truth,
    them letters bolted you to the problem when i was holdin' you,
    we had somethin' where solace bloomed,
    like fate had it planned, it bonded our souls with glue,
    this heart's so cold it's blue from this rose i pruned in snow,
    now, you're just somebody that i used to know..

    ---

    -Under the Konfluence-
    (this was a collab, but i just showed my verse, everyone else in this with me was exceptionally good, one of my favorite writes.. this was about a friend who had heart surgery, and he taught me alot about writing, and i thought i'd show some respect and give a good gesture)

    Beat:
    Dreamers [Prod. Dope Antelope] Lupe Fiasco Type Beat - YouTube

    you funny fam, always reminiscing 'bout the loves ya had,
    the drugs were bad, but you remain, still, with the rust intact,
    with an arched back from heart attacks to life when the dark is back
    you're always pulling through in a vehicle that cant part them cracks,
    Now at the wishin' well back to sit and tell what rings your bell,
    reflections relapse the grief of a masterpiece in this hell of yours....
    yo, This man's been bleeding ink from pores since God given him force,
    seeming deformed and damaged, it's never heeding them roars ,
    he's got a soul that's reckless with no key to an exit, it's-
    always conveying poetic essence with phonetic messages,
    always driving through madness' ashes in the chasm of blackness ,
    in the shadow of sadness nothin' can bow his aggression,
    the pen thunderin' only sounds his affections
    in a cloud of depression, profound & intense with
    every drop it's pain that's a powerful lesson,
    now it seems like his hours is seconds,
    God wants his ticket and to cash it in,
    but the Kon never lets his assets swim.


     
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    Malevolentality Malevolentality

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    I hope atleast someone'll show some love haha...
     
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    I like it! How often do you write lyrics?
     
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