Discussion in 'Gamer Creations' started by Krew, Oct 24, 2010.
Good job krew on this article.
Everything is easy to read and you explain things pretty well.
Seems good, I did see a few grammar errors (Im not sure how much "perfectness" your going for), the flow and everything else seemed okay. You did repeat yourself twice towards the end with saying "I think it is safe to say". Overall great article though!
Also in case your interested you can pre-order GW2 from several places now including Amazon and Newegg.
http://www.newegg.com/Product/Product.aspx?Item=N82E16832784011&Tpk=guild wars 2
uhm what is this for....? There is no explanation what this is XD jared and catica seem to know
it is a article about guilds war and arenanet.I dont know what krew intentions are,but my bet is that he gonna post it somewhere else and inform people with it?lol,idk.
it is for a writers thing. I just want opinions.
thanks Catica, when i read it through i didn't catch that.
This article is now on the main site.
Can ArenaNet Continue to Revolutionize the Free MMO Industry?
great job krew!
Keep the articles coming, we definitely need to spice up that article section
And thanks Ogre for putting it up and putting the link in the thread ;D
I wanna get GW2 now. i really do i am not lying
English isn't my maternal language, so I'm not too sure about some of what I've found.
I think it's safe to say twice (not really an error, but doesn't look nice)
along side = alongside
I'd say the article looks pretty good. The words and sentences flow nicely. You really got a nack for writing. Get those little mistakes out and the article would be truly awesome.
Along side = Alongside yes...
But it is sorta like, Alot and A Lot, most people do Alot not a lot
ah I see....
Yes, the article is good. A couple of screenshots were added to it last night.